MY FAMOUS PERSON
I want to introduce to Çağlar YILDIZ. He is my close friend
and he is studying at Middle East Technical University. In my opinion, he is
supposed to be a famous person because he behaves extraordinarily. According to
him, everything which happens around him is meaningless or mustbe corrected.
Whenever he faces with an event or something, he always says this sentence:
"Why does the person want to behave like this? Or Why did this
happen?" Morever,he never accepts any idea which is not thought by him.
This behaviour that belongs to him is my favorite. As, I think, people should
think carefully and should not accept the ideas which are given other people
without thinking. However, so many people cannot do this except Çağlar. In
addittion, when we talk to him, he always says that he loves studying and this
attracts me so much. Furthermore,he is an open-minded person. He loves thinking
new things and asking. In the future,he
will behave like this and his abilities about thinking will be very effectiv
for us. He affects me in a good way and I think other people ought to know him.
I am sure that they are affected by him
as well.
dear hatice I am really glad that you have chosen Çağlar. I agree with what you wrote about him.I like the organisation and you have used the connectors in a appropriate way. However, instead of ' why does the person' you should use 'a person'. I think instead of 'they are affected by him' you should use ' they will be affected'. except these things,I enjoyed your text. Thanks for sharing this with us :)
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